Before I continue working on this, I'd like an anaylisis of what I have by some newgrounders. Besides audio discrepencies, I'd like some advice on animating and the humor in general. It's short, I know, but any constructive comments would be useful.
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Esty
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really funny!, but yeah the fat shy guy walking to the door did look a bit weird and i think bowser should have a voice but who cares lol it was still funny
That seems to be the consensus. Thanks for taking time to watch and review!
you are very weird
coming from one of my heroes. we should collab sometime.
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Howdy! :) I'm just busy working on new flashes! Are you in afganastan yet?
MindlessMax
Its pretty good,but the fat blob thing going in the door looked weird.Fix that.
Eastbeast
Great thx !